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Shattered Heart

I was there not too long ago, Everything seemed fine. You looked like a happy, healthy family, But I guess looks can be deceiving can’t they. That very night, You broke my brothers heart. It’s shattered in pieces, To never be put back together again. It’s like humpty dumpty, and his wall. He’s fallen off the cliff, and will never find his way up. Not only have you taken his heart, And ripped it in two. But you’ve also taken away his little girls, That’s just something you don’t do to someone. I used to doubt it when people said you were messed, But all doubts are gone now! I stood up for you, When no one else would. Saying you were great, And that you were just going through something. But now I see that it was all a waste of time. Even when you were sleeping around with other guys, He still loved you. He never did anything to hurt you, Never even saw another girl. Even when you were with someone else. He always figured that things would work out, And they often did. But this is something he will never forget. He trusted you, And you broke that bond. He loved you, He still does. The shards of his heart, Are aching because they can’t ever let you go. I used to think you were cool, I used to look up to you, I used to love you, But not anymore! Now I realize that your just a dumb girl, Who doesn’t deserve a man like him. You don’t even deserve a man at all. The girls, my innocent little nieces, Don’t deserve a mother like you. They deserve a mother who loves them, Who cares about them. A mother that won’t go and sleep with a guy, After only two weeks of knowing him. They deserve a mother, Not you!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/22/2010 12:11:00 PM
Thank you Carol. This girl was a role model of mine, and she was truely a friend. And then she broke my brothers heart, and I just can't forgive that!
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Date: 7/22/2010 12:08:00 PM
Today as I read this piece you have written I am thankful that you have shared it with us. I hope you will present us with more of your poetry in the near future. Don't let your ink dry out. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be Sierra. Love, Carol
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