Elizabeth O'Driscoll Poet Rhyme

Shattered Glass

Shattered Glass
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You took my heart
 And shattered it
 Then left it out in space
 Each tiny piece shines brightly
 full of love I won't replace
 Now all thats left
 are songs and words

 To remind me of your face
 So I will leave my broken heart
 to shine in outer space

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Debbie Duncan January 22, 2013 at 6:53 AM great words up there Liz,,, got to be careful of giving that heart away,,, thank you for reading my Missing Pieces. ;} Elizabeth O'Driscoll January 22, 2013 at 7:17 AM Thanks Debbie, don't worry i have a spare one :)

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire December 14, 2012 at 1:29 PM Dear Elizabeth, I have put this in my Favorites and YOU as a Favorite POET This POEM is Awesome it brings back fond memories LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry Elizabeth O'Driscoll December 15, 2012 at 4:50 AM Thank you Harry, I'm glad my heart is finally in safe hands :) xox

Jon A Cavanaugh November 11, 2012 at 6:44 AM I love the rhyme, the meter, and the thought behind this beautiful poem. This will be put among my favorite poems. Elizabeth O'Driscoll December 8, 2012 at 5:17 AM Thank you Jon, love Elizabeth

Vicky Tsiluma November 11, 2012 at 12:01 AM Just beautiful Elizabeth! I like the thought of 'shining in outer space', it's like it's free from inhibitions. Well written piece! ps, sorry you caught me during a 'rant ', and thanks for commenting honestly. Elizabeth O'Driscoll November 11, 2012 at 5:51 AM Thank you Vicky, no need to be sorry, I rant all the time, its good to get things off our chest, yes outer space is a wonderful place indeed, have a beautiful day, love elizabeth

Laura Street November 8, 2012 at 2:39 AM This is a beautiful poem, it flows so beautifully and is so inspiring even though its sad Elizabeth O'Driscoll November 11, 2012 at 5:47 AM Thank you laura, have a beautiful day, love elizabeth

Mohammad Yamin November 6, 2012 at 4:47 PM Wow!!! What an enchanting poem. An amazing write on deprivations of love causing bewilderment and inflicting wounds. Thanks also for your encouraging comments on my poem I want your smile. God Bless you. -Mohammad Elizabeth O'Driscoll November 7, 2012 at 5:36 PM Thank you Mohammad, God bless you too, love elizabeth

David Scott November 5, 2012 at 12:06 PM THIS IS A LOT LIKE MY POEM I WROTE COUPLE WEEKS AGO CALLED BROKEN WICKED WRITE XX DAVIDSCOTT Elizabeth O'Driscoll November 5, 2012 at 2:28 PM Yes I had a look at your poem, It is a wonderful write on love and heartache, love elizabeth xox

Joseph May November 5, 2012 at 8:14 AM I read Richard's poem which led me to yours...this would make a lovely duet in song....love Elizabeth O'Driscoll November 5, 2012 at 2:14 PM Indeed.. all we need is someone who can sing : ) thank you Joseph

Richard Lamoureux November 4, 2012 at 8:37 AM I was inspired to write a response Elizabeth O'Driscoll November 4, 2012 at 7:38 PM Thank you for your lovely poem Richard, good night God bless, love elizabeth Elizabeth O'Driscoll November 4, 2012 at 7:29 PM can't wait to read it Richard :) Richard Lamoureux November 4, 2012 at 6:51 PM When you have a chance come and read the poem I dedicated to yours Elizabeth O'Driscoll November 4, 2012 at 8:38 AM how very nice of you xox Elizabeth O'Driscoll November 4, 2012 at 8:37 AM Thank you Richard, don't you worry, a good heart will always recover, and shine brighter than ever, with the right person, love elizabeth

Richard Lamoureux November 4, 2012 at 8:24 AM Intresting perspective, now that it is shattered I pray that all the pieces will attract the love you deserve and reconstruct a beautiful shining heart.