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Shattered Glass

Shattered Glass ....................... You took my heart And shattered it Then left it out in space Each tiny piece shines brightly full of love I won't replace Now all thats left are songs and words To remind me of your face So I will leave my broken heart to shine in outer space

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 1/22/2013 6:53:00 AM

great words up there Liz,,, got to be careful of giving that heart away,,, thank you for reading my Missing Pieces. ;}

Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 1/22/2013 7:17:00 AM

Thanks Debbie, don't worry i have a spare one :)

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 12/14/2012 1:29:00 PM

Dear Elizabeth, I have put this in my Favorites and YOU as a Favorite POET This POEM is Awesome it brings back fond memories LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 12/15/2012 4:50:00 AM

Thank you Harry, I'm glad my heart is finally in safe hands :) xox

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 11/11/2012 6:44:00 AM

I love the rhyme, the meter, and the thought behind this beautiful poem. This will be put among my favorite poems.

Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 12/8/2012 5:17:00 AM

Thank you Jon, love Elizabeth

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 11/11/2012 12:01:00 AM

Just beautiful Elizabeth! I like the thought of 'shining in outer space', it's like it's free from inhibitions. Well written piece! ps, sorry you caught me during a 'rant ', and thanks for commenting honestly.

Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 11/11/2012 5:51:00 AM

Thank you Vicky, no need to be sorry, I rant all the time, its good to get things off our chest, yes outer space is a wonderful place indeed, have a beautiful day, love elizabeth

Laura Street

Date: 11/8/2012 2:39:00 AM

This is a beautiful poem, it flows so beautifully and is so inspiring even though its sad

Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 11/11/2012 5:47:00 AM

Thank you laura, have a beautiful day, love elizabeth

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 11/6/2012 4:47:00 PM

Wow!!! What an enchanting poem. An amazing write on deprivations of love causing bewilderment and inflicting wounds. Thanks also for your encouraging comments on my poem I want your smile. God Bless you. -Mohammad

Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 11/7/2012 5:36:00 PM

Thank you Mohammad, God bless you too, love elizabeth

David Scott

Date: 11/5/2012 12:06:00 PM

THIS IS A LOT LIKE MY POEM I WROTE COUPLE WEEKS AGO CALLED BROKEN WICKED WRITE XX DAVIDSCOTT

Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 11/5/2012 2:28:00 PM

Yes I had a look at your poem, It is a wonderful write on love and heartache, love elizabeth xox

Joseph May

Date: 11/5/2012 8:14:00 AM

I read Richard's poem which led me to yours...this would make a lovely duet in song....love

Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 11/5/2012 2:14:00 PM

Indeed.. all we need is someone who can sing : ) thank you Joseph

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/4/2012 8:37:00 AM

I was inspired to write a response

Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 11/4/2012 7:38:00 PM

Thank you for your lovely poem Richard, good night God bless, love elizabeth

Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 11/4/2012 7:29:00 PM

can't wait to read it Richard :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/4/2012 6:51:00 PM

When you have a chance come and read the poem I dedicated to yours

Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 11/4/2012 8:38:00 AM

how very nice of you xox

Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 11/4/2012 8:37:00 AM

Thank you Richard, don't you worry, a good heart will always recover, and shine brighter than ever, with the right person, love elizabeth

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/4/2012 8:24:00 AM

Intresting perspective, now that it is shattered I pray that all the pieces will attract the love you deserve and reconstruct a beautiful shining heart.