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Shattered Glass

Shattered Glass
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You took my heart
 And shattered it
 Then left it out in space
 Each tiny piece shines brightly
 full of love I won't replace
 Now all thats left
 are songs and words

 To remind me of your face
 So I will leave my broken heart
 to shine in outer space

Copyright © Elizabeth O'Driscoll | Year Posted 2012

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Debbie Duncan Date: 1/22/2013 6:53:00 AM great words up there Liz,,, got to be careful of giving that heart away,,, thank you for reading my Missing Pieces. ;} Login to Reply Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 1/22/2013 7:17:00 AM Thanks Debbie, don't worry i have a spare one :)

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire Date: 12/14/2012 1:29:00 PM Dear Elizabeth, I have put this in my Favorites and YOU as a Favorite POET This POEM is Awesome it brings back fond memories LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry Login to Reply Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 12/15/2012 4:50:00 AM Thank you Harry, I'm glad my heart is finally in safe hands :) xox

Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 11/11/2012 6:44:00 AM I love the rhyme, the meter, and the thought behind this beautiful poem. This will be put among my favorite poems. Login to Reply Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 12/8/2012 5:17:00 AM Thank you Jon, love Elizabeth

Vicky Tsiluma Date: 11/11/2012 12:01:00 AM Just beautiful Elizabeth! I like the thought of 'shining in outer space', it's like it's free from inhibitions. Well written piece! ps, sorry you caught me during a 'rant ', and thanks for commenting honestly. Login to Reply Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 11/11/2012 5:51:00 AM Thank you Vicky, no need to be sorry, I rant all the time, its good to get things off our chest, yes outer space is a wonderful place indeed, have a beautiful day, love elizabeth

Laura Street Date: 11/8/2012 2:39:00 AM This is a beautiful poem, it flows so beautifully and is so inspiring even though its sad Login to Reply Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 11/11/2012 5:47:00 AM Thank you laura, have a beautiful day, love elizabeth

Mohammad Yamin Date: 11/6/2012 4:47:00 PM Wow!!! What an enchanting poem. An amazing write on deprivations of love causing bewilderment and inflicting wounds. Thanks also for your encouraging comments on my poem I want your smile. God Bless you. -Mohammad Login to Reply Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 11/7/2012 5:36:00 PM Thank you Mohammad, God bless you too, love elizabeth

David Scott Date: 11/5/2012 12:06:00 PM THIS IS A LOT LIKE MY POEM I WROTE COUPLE WEEKS AGO CALLED BROKEN WICKED WRITE XX DAVIDSCOTT Login to Reply Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 11/5/2012 2:28:00 PM Yes I had a look at your poem, It is a wonderful write on love and heartache, love elizabeth xox

Joseph May Date: 11/5/2012 8:14:00 AM I read Richard's poem which led me to yours...this would make a lovely duet in song....love Login to Reply Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 11/5/2012 2:14:00 PM Indeed.. all we need is someone who can sing : ) thank you Joseph

Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/4/2012 8:37:00 AM I was inspired to write a response Login to Reply Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 11/4/2012 7:38:00 PM Thank you for your lovely poem Richard, good night God bless, love elizabeth Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 11/4/2012 7:29:00 PM can't wait to read it Richard :) Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/4/2012 6:51:00 PM When you have a chance come and read the poem I dedicated to yours Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 11/4/2012 8:38:00 AM how very nice of you xox Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 11/4/2012 8:37:00 AM Thank you Richard, don't you worry, a good heart will always recover, and shine brighter than ever, with the right person, love elizabeth

Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/4/2012 8:24:00 AM Intresting perspective, now that it is shattered I pray that all the pieces will attract the love you deserve and reconstruct a beautiful shining heart. Login to Reply