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yet words that flow, the rhyme you know, forgiveness really matters, exactly as you try to show, hatred mind does shatter, forgive, with love although, so many curse the latter, love at end of days you know, sieve chaff from oats the patter... be there soul that matters? Don Johnson

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Date: 2/20/2012 3:38:00 PM
This write is very meaningful Don! Both stanzas states so much and brings so much into light! I love this poem a lot! Keep 'em coming! Great Work!!
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Date: 2/20/2012 1:16:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem, Don. An excellent write. Love, Kim
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Date: 2/20/2012 8:51:00 AM
Don that's the problem with life sieving the chaff from oats, your on top form mate..Dave
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Date: 2/20/2012 8:20:00 AM
you're in top form here Don, this is bloody good mate, in fact brilliant. harry
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Date: 2/20/2012 4:18:00 AM
Gorgeous piece, both stanza's bold and meaningful. A great write
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