Shasta Daisy

A green-eyed cyclops flutters albino lashes against the cold wind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Ashley Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 8:48 PM
Oh, your imagery is just so gorgeous, Dale. Full of life and color. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Cozart Avatar
September 16, 2019 at 8:47 AM
Thanks so much, Susan.
Dietrich Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 4:45 PM
ooohhhh, I love this!!! Congrats on the winners list
Cozart Avatar
September 16, 2019 at 8:47 AM
Thank you, Andrea.
Mcintosh Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 12:10 AM
Beautiful. Congratulations and blessings.
Blodgett Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 4:32 PM
You brought daisy back into the world! a new form maybe: haiku/imagist! Loved it Lonna
Gauthier Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 3:48 PM
Bravo. Well deserved win, Dale.
Allison Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 3:42 PM
dropping back with my congrats Dale:-) hugs Jan xx
Lamoureux Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 6:41 PM
So well expressed. Congrats.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 12:50 PM
Ooh I love this one! Congrats on your win! xomo
Cozart Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 2:52 PM
Thanks, Maureen!
Kendrick Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 11:59 AM
Very interesting creation..Way to go..Congrats on your winning work.Sara
Gauthier Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 10:20 AM
Beautiful imagery. Gotta make this a FAVE. Congrats on your win, Dale.
Cozart Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 2:52 PM
Thanks so much, Line.
Haight Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 8:42 AM
Oh, I love this, Dale! Amazing imagery. Congratulations on your nice win in the contest. :) Sandra
Roper Avatar
January 19, 2018 at 9:24 PM
Dale, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Barden Avatar
January 19, 2018 at 7:07 PM
Very cool write, Dale - congrats on your well-deserved win, my friend ... this was fun! :-)
Cozart Avatar
January 19, 2018 at 7:42 PM
Thanks, Greg!
Dietrich Avatar
January 19, 2018 at 7:03 PM
Ha, I see I already told you it was amazing. I said it twice without realizing it, so that should tell you something!!!
Cozart Avatar
January 19, 2018 at 7:42 PM
Thanks, Andrea!
Dietrich Avatar
January 19, 2018 at 7:03 PM
This is amazing, Dale. It's very haiku for me and one of the best on the winner list! Congrats.
Allison Avatar
January 19, 2018 at 4:16 PM
Many congrats on your win Dale lovely to read this little gem again:-) hugs Jan xx
Cozart Avatar
January 19, 2018 at 4:37 PM
Thanks, Jan!! Your rock!
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 19, 2018 at 2:52 PM
You always treat us by going outside the box Dale. I love your creative entry! Congratulations! : )
Cozart Avatar
January 19, 2018 at 3:37 PM
Thanks again, Connie, for all your support!
Smith Avatar
January 19, 2018 at 2:03 PM
Terrific Dale, congratulations...
Cozart Avatar
January 19, 2018 at 2:27 PM
Thanks, Charlie.
Allison Avatar
June 25, 2017 at 6:58 AM
Wonderful imagery Dale congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Nusker Avatar
June 24, 2017 at 11:57 PM
Great imagery there. Congrats on your win.
Dietrich Avatar
June 24, 2017 at 6:24 PM
wow, this imagery is amazing. Congrats to you, Dale.
Cozart Avatar
June 24, 2017 at 6:34 PM
Thanks, Andrea!
Canerdy Avatar
June 24, 2017 at 5:40 PM
Beautiful, Dale--CONGRATS! Janice
Cozart Avatar
June 24, 2017 at 5:48 PM
Thanks always, Janice!
Rutherford Avatar
May 21, 2017 at 3:12 PM
Very good Halku Dale.
Cozart Avatar
May 21, 2017 at 3:46 PM
Thanks, Anne. I really appreciate it.
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