Sharp As a Tack

Sharp as a tack is what they say
When someone is perceptive,
But when that person's old and gray
The brain's not as receptive.

He may still seem both quick and smart
In things that really matter,
But aging surely plays its part
To make that tack much flatter.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Murray Avatar
October 15, 2016 at 5:25 PM
So true Ilene. Well said.
Mcleod Avatar
October 15, 2016 at 2:11 PM
Short, sweet and cute. Very well thought out Ilene. I like it much. Trevor
Allison Avatar
October 14, 2016 at 7:05 PM
Oh so true Ilene:-( Hugs Jan xx
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