Sharks

The sharks in Hawai'i
Just love a good feast
Fresh from Japan
Or somewhere back East

There's always the cost -
An arm or a leg -
But natives will carve you
A coconut peg

So jump in the ocean!
Its really a thrill
To watch baby sharks
Share their first kill!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Gibson Avatar
December 7, 2020 at 1:17 PM
I love your humor..lmao..
Laurie Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 7:56 PM
G’day Rico … when we invade a sharks territory of course all they see is dinner - be very careful Rico - Lindsay
Leffanta Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 10:49 AM
If people would make the time to "know their enemy", they would find sharks are easy to get along with if one doesn't tempt them. Aloha! Rico
Leiser Avatar
October 3, 2020 at 1:26 PM
This verse is very clever and humorous, Rico! Loved it! :)
Dietrich Avatar
September 26, 2020 at 4:26 PM
I love this kind of humor!!
Leffanta Avatar
September 27, 2020 at 11:25 AM
Happy to keep you laughing! Aloha! Rico
Kaufman Avatar
September 26, 2020 at 2:50 PM
did you mean this literally or is it a metaphor? I was just wondering..not swimming and not in Hawaii..
Rodrigues Avatar
September 26, 2020 at 12:02 PM
Ut natives will carve you a coconut leg...lol. Funny only from the shore. I loved living in Hawaii!
Leffanta Avatar
September 27, 2020 at 11:22 AM
You will love it even more during the winter months! Aloha! Rico
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 26, 2020 at 10:29 AM
Humans infesting shark’s waters, paying an arm and a leg for their trouble. ;), xomo!
Leffanta Avatar
September 26, 2020 at 11:07 AM
Thanks to Donald Trump, MILLIONS fewer tourists muddy the waters of Waikiki, so reef fish have returned with sharks to feed on the fish, hence sharks have been sighted every day of the past fortnight in Waikiki, and everyone complains because sharks don't spend money! Aloha! Rico
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