Shark In the Soup

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When I ordered fish soup I hadn't a clue That a predator lurked within the brew I was ready to taste it so I dipped my spoon in But rising from the bowl was a dorsal fin! I took up a fork to spear this fish Which was swimming around making my soup swish The waiter came over to see what was wrong I said "there's a shark in my soup, he doesn't belong" The waiter decided to take the bowl back I told him to bring something that didn't attack The waiter returned and granted my wish And brought me a bowl filled with goldfish! - 12-28-18 Shark in the Soup Contest Sponsor.. Anthony Slausin

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Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/6/2019 9:54:00 PM

Congratulations Joseph, on this win. Hopefully no shark will ever be in your soup. And, no goldfish either. :) Brandy

P.S. Awtry

Date: 1/6/2019 5:56:00 PM

loved this fun write! Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/6/2019 4:25:00 PM

Congrats for the win. I thought it was funny enough for a number placement. So good, Joseph!

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/6/2019 6:56:00 AM

Funny. Congrats, Joseph.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/6/2019 4:17:00 AM

dropping back with my congrats Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Brandy Nicole

Date: 12/29/2018 10:02:00 PM

:) Awe, you now got a cute little goldfish swimming in your soup!! Yikes, yes!! Watch out for a shark that might attack. You have created a masterpiece. ~ Brandy