Shark

Deadly predator beneath the waters mouths in carriage of sharp saws swift and strong, crazy for blood.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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February 1, 2016 at 12:15 PM
I'm a great white fan. I have a large JAWS poster in the mid's of my living room, :) Predators.. awesome... SKAT
Makama Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 9:05 AM
Damn! I can never visit you even in the dreams.... Lol! Thank you so much SKAT A
Beaufort Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 8:01 AM
Inspiring!! Ah--there are so many sharks around.
Makama Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 11:10 AM
hahahaha... Yes, some are above the waters... thanks for your contributions
Vaso Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 10:54 PM
My ex gf is now a shark? Kidding! Loved this haiku Funom!
Makama Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 8:01 AM
hahahaha... I really do not know what you mean, I just hope she doesn't love blood or love biting. Thank you so much for your comment
Davey Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 1:38 PM
I was bitten by a mako shark many years ago in Mexico so this I know so well. Thank you for sharing.
Makama Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 8:00 AM
Thank you so much Brian Davey
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