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Sharing Out On the Porch

The red flame burns brighter each day
It luxuriates in fall's 
Angular sunlight; beautiful 
Japanese Maple's pall

But not true death, but just a rest.
Resurrection come spring.
Today with a moisture coat and 
A heavy dew that clings..  

Just for fun
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Puddifoot Avatar
December 4, 2012 at 5:51 AM
this is beautiful, sara, and paints such a vivid picture of the maples, you really excel at these 'snapshots' of nature :-)
A   Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 9:35 PM
Hello Sara, you must love your porch... nature looks pretty through your poems... deep image...pd
Widjanarko Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 6:19 PM
Really a warmth which leaking through the beauty of your verses Sara, I enjoy the views which you offered :)- hug, Yanny
Horne Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 3:29 PM
beautiful write indeed, my friend
Horsman Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 3:15 PM
wow Sara, these just get better and better, what a wonderful place you live....
Sivey Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 12:20 PM
Beautiful, this is such a beautiful poem! I totally enjoyed every line of this poem! You have written a masterful piece here, Great Work!!
Sweetheart Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 10:00 AM
lovely expressive lines of fabulous imagery .. u should enter in Kindle the Light luv .. updating my fav poet list and adding u on today Sara ..
Guzzi Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 7:29 AM
So nice to read your work to start the day..Light & Love
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