Sharing

we have shared many things

                          love is ultimately what I believe passes most between us 

        but we also have shared
   moments of anger, dislike and mistrust
times of joy, passion and admiration
          long nights and days
                   of both clarity, toxicity and
                            everything in between 

we have disclosed
   intense fears, desires, hopes and 
               even our whims and daydreams

                   we have matched
                         intellect and humor
                            even vanity and conceit

             we have exposed
        shame and success
    pride and humiliation
cultivated talent and offered criticism
                and have imparted both
             promises and disappointments

   our tender kisses have been intermingled 
      with vicious blows, both intermittent

     we have in common our darkest secrets 
         we have only told each other
              we have given each other solace and pain
                          and although we have both shed tears 
               our share of laughter has always been more abundant

                         we share
        a home, a bed, a life 
                               which has taken many forms
                   in the years we have been together
                          
                     and we now create our family each day
                              with the child we share
                                            this is far greater than any of these other things
                     and I now share with you
                               my deepest gratitude
                                  for all we have
                                 in equal measure

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 4/3/2010 2:42:00 AM
Nice!! I love the use of white space and how you held me captive right to the end...and what a finish :) "and I now share with you my deepest gratitude for all we have in equal measure" Beautiful and heartfelt!
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Date: 12/21/2009 11:02:00 AM
Dear Shayana, This is a lovely poem. What I like most is its purity. It also reflects your courage. You have said everything boldly. Thanks for your gracious comments on my poem Donot knock that has won the semi finals. -Mohammad
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