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SHARING Stopped in a winery. Splurged on chilled bottle of sparkling Moscato wine, salted, crispy crackers, soft goat cheese to nibble. Shared stories, goals, plans and splendid time with daughter. 4/20/21 Pleiades S Poetry Kim Merryman Used: How Many Syllables

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Kim Merryman

Date: 4/25/2021 2:10:00 PM

A very descriptive and flowing write, Marilene! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Marilene Evans
Date: 4/25/2021 2:57:00 PM

Thank you so much for your compliments and for my placement, Kim. Have a great Sunday.

Brian Sambourne

Date: 4/23/2021 8:28:00 PM

Wonderfully evocative write. I can taste the cheese + crackers. Congratulations! Brian

Marilene Evans
Date: 4/24/2021 8:24:00 AM

Thank you, Brian. Have a great week-end.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/20/2021 7:40:00 PM

I have read ten or more of these; this is one of the top favorites for me. Good luck in the contest!

Marilene Evans
Date: 4/20/2021 7:47:00 PM

Caren, thank you so much. Good thing was she drove... LOL... We always go to Napa Valley for mud/mineral water bath and body massage, twice a year. A mother/daughter time and we always stop by this winery. I am so thankful for my sweet Missy.