Melani Udaeta Poet Nonet

Shared With Love Revolution

Once upon a time lovingly shared,
instant transport to a new world;
Flying on razor wishes
that slice giving vision;
Go change everything!
It’s in the book;
There’s nothing 
you can’t 
do.

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Kim Rodrigues November 7, 2023 at 7:26 AM Razor wishes that slice giving vision…though to some this could be wrists, it seems your word habitation is joyous transport. Melani Udaeta November 7, 2023 at 8:07 AM Thank you! We are in a world where we need to cut through the nonsense atm. No? Thank you for reading and understanding this piece perfectly. Blessings