Home » Poems » Aaliyah O'Neil » Shared Journey

Shared Journey

A snail draws a map across my shoe, unaware I'm standing still too.

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/22/2025 7:51:00 PM

Ha, ha. Cute and clever, Aaliyah. Smiles, Gershon

Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/24/2025 8:42:00 AM

Thanks so much, Gershon. Glad it brought a smile—appreciate your kind words.

Mike Bayles

Date: 5/22/2025 8:02:00 AM

You painted a nice image.

Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/24/2025 8:42:00 AM

Thank you. I’m really pleased the image came through clearly for you.

Paige Hind

Date: 5/21/2025 9:52:00 PM

Sweet- it's an image that is dear

Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/24/2025 8:41:00 AM

Thank you—I'm glad the image resonated with you. It’s one close to my heart.