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A snail draws a map
across my shoe, unaware 
I'm standing still too.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Wolf Avatar
May 22, 2025 at 7:51 PM
Ha, ha. Cute and clever, Aaliyah. Smiles, Gershon
O'Neil Avatar
May 24, 2025 at 8:42 AM
Thanks so much, Gershon. Glad it brought a smile—appreciate your kind words.
Bayles Avatar
May 22, 2025 at 8:02 AM
You painted a nice image.
O'Neil Avatar
May 24, 2025 at 8:42 AM
Thank you. I’m really pleased the image came through clearly for you.
Hind Avatar
May 21, 2025 at 9:52 PM
Sweet- it's an image that is dear
O'Neil Avatar
May 24, 2025 at 8:41 AM
Thank you—I'm glad the image resonated with you. It’s one close to my heart.
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