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Shards of Glass

A thousand words in every tear an essay down her face the girl that's staring back at her looks such a damn disgrace she puts her fist right through the glass and picks a tiny shard then drags it right across her flesh till anger turns to calm

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/5/2015 5:22:00 AM
I think the rhyme softens the harshness of this, yet it still has a weighted punch to show the emotion. Well written, Kind Rgds, Laura
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Date: 5/13/2015 2:29:00 PM
Wow! Leaves one speechless. Good poetry. What story!
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Debbie Cook
Date: 5/16/2015 6:34:00 AM
Thankyou

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