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Shaping Cookies

shaping cookies. . . . 
I form Christmas lyrics
with frosting smeared lips


Written originally For Cyndi MacMillan's
CREATIVITY-- WRITE A MODERN HAIKU Poetry Contest

Copyright © Andrea Dietrich | Year Posted 2011

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Debbie Duncan Date: 6/11/2013 1:36:00 AM Cute one Andrea,,, glad you liked " She Waits" I thought all couplets were two lined poems? Tell me what form do you think ;} Login to Reply

Timothy Hicks Date: 4/16/2013 2:12:00 AM This was sweet. I always find Christmas an incredibly nostalgic time for me. And every year, almost without fail, I'd decorate cookies with my nephews. OOOooh the Christmas music (you ever start singing Chestnuts Roasting on an Open Fire in the middle of friggin' July, by chance? Hahahaha... Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 11/30/2012 7:32:00 PM Hello Andrea, reading this haiku again... is it a haiku...LOL..anyways.. the season of shaping cookies are here again... love this one again.... PD Login to Reply

Black Eyed Susan Date: 12/10/2011 10:44:00 AM congrats on your win! you're kicking butt on the winner's lists! Login to Reply

Adelaja Olayiwola Date: 12/9/2011 10:11:00 AM great win pal. Congrats Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 12/9/2011 3:54:00 AM After u eat all these winning cookies, bring my some figgy pudding! Congrats gurlie!! ;) Gwendolen Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/9/2011 2:16:00 AM Congratulations x Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 12/8/2011 11:23:00 PM Congratulations Andrea on your big win.I loved it 1st time around! Login to Reply

Charlotte Puddifoot Date: 12/8/2011 4:41:00 PM congrats andrea on your impressive win with this delicious haiku :-) Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 12/8/2011 3:45:00 PM I'm thinking of baking too LOL probably won't BUT..hmmm congrad's Light & Love Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 12/8/2011 3:31:00 PM This was a yummy write. Congrats on your win! Kim Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 12/8/2011 1:05:00 PM Oh this is really sweet-- haha you could very well be describing me here -- very nice haiku, Andrea and definitely in the spirit of Christmas too-- super congrats on your win :) hugs to you-- btw-- yup I am here only because I can't load any other pages!! aaack. get back to you in email soon, ok? Login to Reply

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer Date: 12/8/2011 12:16:00 PM Wow Andrea....I can so picture this! Very impressive my friend :) Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 12/8/2011 12:14:00 PM Andrea congrats on your win, liked it first time round..David Login to Reply

Edward Mccormick Date: 12/8/2011 12:06:00 PM Cute as a button Andrea... Your carolling lips sound so tasty here! Haha! Beautiful victory! ~ECMc Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 12/8/2011 11:48:00 AM Congrats on your win, my friend. God always bless you. bl Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 12/8/2011 10:58:00 AM Congratulations on your placement in Cyndi's "Creativity" contest Andrea. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Judy Ball Date: 12/7/2011 9:18:00 AM That's a special time when you can make cookies with your kids and sing songs. Loved that when they were home. Brings back memories of happy times in the kitchen. God Bless, JB Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 12/7/2011 5:24:00 AM It's all in the icing, Andrea....the song sits in the very back back seat. Curious to see how this clever contest is judged bc I have read some exceptionally grand pieces....like THIS! Jack Horne wrote one that had me in stitches last night too..something about airplanes and model glue..... Have a great day shaping the minds of our future. Love, Gwendolen Login to Reply

Black Eyed Susan Date: 12/5/2011 7:45:00 AM sounds like fun, and delicious too. cookies...i've already started eating some my mom baked for xmas. i'm prob. going to gain 10 lbs just from chocolate chip cookies! tis the season :P Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 12/2/2011 9:50:00 PM Andrea,,, zanny am I...lol.. thank you~~~ you should see me eat a donut... i eat everything but the hole of the donut... and cookies... please bake me some... lol.... nice one,,, good luck in the contest. (( did you get my comment )) anyways take care~always,..p.d. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 12/2/2011 2:29:00 PM Very impressive work..I believe that frosting would make me sing also..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara Login to Reply

Phyllis Babcock Date: 12/1/2011 11:04:00 AM Making me darn hungry for some sugar cookies and there goes my figure ha ha. Love it. phyl Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 11/30/2011 12:48:00 PM LOL, I can see this one : ) Many congrats to you too, my friend : ) Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 11/30/2011 10:49:00 AM Singing while baking cookies. Um hummmmm. Yumm yummmmmm. I have gained weight, but there is no use trying to take it off this time of the year. Your fine Haiku just put another pound around my middle. Love, daver Login to Reply

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