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Shapeshifter

G entle breezes, then again not, E yes that feel your heart's regret of M issing years and hidden tears, I n dreams and schemes forever play, N ot once did stop and ask me why? I walk on land, then fly away

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Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 4/26/2009 10:48:00 AM

ah. the two faces of the Gemini, I know so well, I married one! LOL ~Trudy~

Anthony Nutter

Date: 4/9/2009 3:05:00 AM

Wonderful write, shape shifters reminds me a lot of Shadows. Enjoyed the read thanks

Catherine Reinke

Date: 4/4/2009 5:40:00 AM

love it, had me insuspense about what was shifting then the delight of I walk on land , then fly away. very nice.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 4/2/2009 12:46:00 PM

Dear Jim, Great Acrostic Good Luck in the Contest Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comment on "Hodgepodge Again" ALWAYS... HG

L'Nass Shango

Date: 4/2/2009 12:20:00 PM

So you are Gemini? Goes that account for your double consciousness like the seventh son of W E Dubois? Fun write. Peace and Love

David Smalling

Date: 3/30/2009 1:31:00 AM

Jim, this is my mother's sign, all treat all who belong to it as good people ... she was good. God bless you, best of luck too.

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/29/2009 5:26:00 PM

Gemini's are the best! I have two in my family. You did a super job! Good luck! Love, shar

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/29/2009 4:54:00 PM

I am a fellow Gemini....I love your take on the Acrostic poem contest....this is perfectly wonderful!! Great job! ~ love, Carrie

Laurie Ginn

Date: 3/29/2009 2:31:00 PM

How very touching and vunerable Jim nice job.

Sue Mason

Date: 3/29/2009 2:07:00 PM

Awesome!! Good luck in the contest!! Must be an "acrostic" day ... I just finished one. Now you can do one with the word Shapeshifter ... smile ... just a suggestion ... love that word!!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/29/2009 12:58:00 PM

gentle breezes,thats what you bring me with your kind heart,thanks for your prayers much appreciated,and lovely acrostic-thanks charma

Christopher Higgins

Date: 3/29/2009 11:51:00 AM

I love the flow of this piece...the opening and ending are great....best wishes.

Sebastian Aaron Baez

Date: 3/29/2009 11:08:00 AM

WHAT! are you smoking over there buddy LOL! great poem, can't stop smiling.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/29/2009 11:05:00 AM

Great acrostic, James! My boyfriend and my sister are both Geminis, and they sometimes leave me wondering who they really are. They are "shapeshifters" in personality, but always a source of great joy for me. Love this work and it's going into my favorites!