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Shape of B

Big black bugs Beasts and Butterflies Befitting Betsy’s Beauty Betting Beyond Belief Both Boys Begin Betting Bigtime Believing beyond belly laughs and sunbeams They both traveled by boat and bird into Bali Brave buccaneers breezing along brilliantly Bye! We bellowed Big buds Buried beside boy began by Beseeching both beyond a Bigmouthed bee be bright? Boisterous bigwigs buried both basic beliefs Butterflies and bumblebees began blowing Bubbles amid bumper crop of begonias.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/26/2022 1:13:00 PM

A amazing write/shape. It must have taken a long time to come up with this fun/wonderful write. Have a fun/great day...........

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/27/2022 1:38:00 AM

Thank you Paula

L Milton Hankins

Date: 7/26/2022 9:21:00 AM

Wow - It would take me centuries to come up with something like this. Beautiful. I did think the buccaneers should be "brave" instead of "basic," Caren. Utterly fantastic!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/26/2022 9:48:00 AM

Thank you Hank. I may change that.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/26/2022 5:33:00 AM

That’s a sweet shape!