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SHAMELESS NAKED TREES

  ?(A HAIKU TRIO)

 

Trees’ leaves were ripped off,

leaving nakedness behind

with teasing winter:-

 

Nude trees not ashamed

as winter winds teased them;

their hope barked in spring:-

 

Through thrusting winter,

naked trees never gave in;

waiting coming leaves:-

 

SHAMELESS NAKED TREES: A HAIKU TRIO

Trees’ leaves were ripped off,
leaving nakedness behind
with teasing winter:-

Nude trees not ashamed
as winter winds teased them;
their hope barked in spring:-

Through thrusting winter,
naked trees never gave in;
waiting coming leaves:-
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Lowe Avatar
April 21, 2025 at 2:26 PM
Thanks, Sand. I'm pleased this allegorical rendering resonated with you. Trees canvas so many messages to us. One. Peace and Love.
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April 13, 2025 at 1:31 PM
trees....my favorite plant leafs leave trees .....len
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