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Shaman Wayra

Dressed in a loin cloth, his face and body painted, he chants and dances wildly round the fire to drum beat... the student lawyer's weekend job. Written 21st May for Nette's Wayra contest

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 5/31/2020 1:48:00 PM

A different twist to the end of this one. Made me smile. love phyl

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/27/2020 9:39:00 AM

Enjoyed this Jack,,ever so different,

Paul Callus

Date: 5/24/2020 3:40:00 AM

Love the end twist, Jack:) Not at all surprised, though....something I expect from you (slipping aces down your sleeve:) Best regards my friend. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/23/2020 8:08:00 PM

hahaha. LOVED your twist at the end! congrats I see as well!!

Aditi Mishra

Date: 5/23/2020 6:07:00 PM

This one is so different! And seems real too. The choices between passion and profession. Congratulations on your win Jack :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/23/2020 6:00:00 AM

goodness, jack...you had me in stitches with your last line, as in, whattt?...not exactly right down my alley ( loincloth for a working student) but you got me!...congrats on your win in my contest!...huggs

Judy Ball

Date: 5/22/2020 2:27:00 PM

WoW! Very clever twist for a surprise ending. Really good imagery. This is a winner for sure, God Bless and stay well, JB

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 5/22/2020 1:20:00 PM

Wow, now that's what I call the element of surprise. I did not see that coming! Best of luck in the contest, Jack, and have a blessed weekend:) xx Rhonda

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/22/2020 8:51:00 AM

Interesting way to go. I wonder how much that jobs pays??? Thanks for dropping by. Sara