Jack Horne Poet Verse

Shaman Wayra

Dressed in a loin cloth,
his face and body painted, 
he chants and dances wildly
round the fire to drum beat...
the student lawyer's weekend job.

Written 21st May for Nette's Wayra contest

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Phyllis Babcock May 31, 2020 at 1:48 PM A different twist to the end of this one. Made me smile. love phyl

Harry Horsman May 27, 2020 at 9:39 AM Enjoyed this Jack,,ever so different,

Paul Callus May 24, 2020 at 3:40 AM Love the end twist, Jack:) Not at all surprised, though....something I expect from you (slipping aces down your sleeve:) Best regards my friend. // paul

Andrea Dietrich May 23, 2020 at 8:08 PM hahaha. LOVED your twist at the end! congrats I see as well!!

Aditi Mishra May 23, 2020 at 6:07 PM This one is so different! And seems real too. The choices between passion and profession. Congratulations on your win Jack :)

Nette Onclaud May 23, 2020 at 6:00 AM goodness, jack...you had me in stitches with your last line, as in, whattt?...not exactly right down my alley ( loincloth for a working student) but you got me!...congrats on your win in my contest!...huggs

Judy Ball May 22, 2020 at 2:27 PM WoW! Very clever twist for a surprise ending. Really good imagery. This is a winner for sure, God Bless and stay well, JB

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders May 22, 2020 at 1:20 PM Wow, now that's what I call the element of surprise. I did not see that coming! Best of luck in the contest, Jack, and have a blessed weekend:) xx Rhonda

Sara Kendrick May 22, 2020 at 8:51 AM Interesting way to go. I wonder how much that jobs pays??? Thanks for dropping by. Sara