Shalom

Resonating glory
The Beautiful babbling brook
Welcomes springs mist
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Christian Avatar
March 6, 2009 at 7:40 AM
this is a great write, Shalom means peace not peace of this world but the peace of God which brings total wholeness,. Take care from diane
Degenhardt Avatar
March 6, 2009 at 5:46 AM
Love the imagery you so well create in this beautiful write. M ichael
Winter Avatar
March 6, 2009 at 5:10 AM
Absolutely gorgeous. I am there and it is so beautiful and peaceful. Love, Shar
P. Avatar
March 6, 2009 at 4:53 AM
really cute... there that last line!! ~ Arany
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace