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The anger in her grows as each day passes; making her want to kill either herself… or 
someone else. She is terrified and tries to push her friends and loved ones away so she 
doesn’t end up doing something to them that she will regret later on in life. The hole in her 
stomach gets bigger as the anger grows. No body can stop it, and that is the worst part. The 
way she pushes people away making herself sick with the disgust. It doesn’t help that she is 
now and will be until the hole and the is gone… alone. The word sounds so comforting; the 
fact that she cant hurt anybody anymore… alone makes sense… alone is good, she will stay 
that way until she ends up dead. Alone will save the ones that she loves. If they are mad, if 
they give up then she wont have to worry about hurting them, she will write a note telling 
them that she is done, and she is letting the anger consume her while her companion still 
fights it. Her companion makes all of fighting worth while, but how the hell do you fight when 
it is so exhausting? How do you win when there is no winning? How do you overcome anger 
when anger overcomes you? She did it… why cant I?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/13/2009 10:07:00 AM
Arianne, sometimes we have to feel anger in order to appreciate love and joy. Nice work!
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Date: 2/4/2009 7:56:00 AM
i can relate t this poem. . .why cant i just let go is what alot of ppl ask me but how can i when it continues to happen. . . .anyway, great write. . .very very good. . .best wishes~ *Breana
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