Shaken To the Core

Her sad eyes and tear stained face evoked such ambivalent feelings;
I could barely stand to look upon the half-naked child in front of me. 
She turned her face toward me with a pained look begging for help.
Maternal feelings welled up within for this pitiful tangled haired waif. 

Gaping in abject horror, I observed the orphan's frail arms wrapped 
tenaciously around a dead rat and held close to her dirt smeared body. 
I sensed this sewer 'pet rat' had been her only source of comfort in life. 
The one thing she turned to, when sad or hungry, would never again be.
 
While resisting the urge to gather her up in my arms and dry her tears, 
still I desired to sympathize... whispering, "Don't cry honey, it'll be OK". 
I lied, knowing it wouldn't.  Besides what could I do with so little to give. 
I turned and walked away not wanting to face my growing sense of lack.

I awoke with a start, shuddering, deeply disturbed and troubled to tears.
Sometimes the vivid images, like a horror movie returning to haunt me,
make me question, "Who is that wretched child so forlorn and dejected?
The memories shake my very soul, the hidden message still eluding me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Meier-Hans Avatar
August 31, 2014 at 9:55 PM
What a beautiful piece Charlene. So sad.
Mccutcheon Avatar
August 31, 2014 at 10:02 PM
Thank you Brenda for taking the time to read and comment on this poem and I see in an e-mail you are new to Poetry Soup. Welcome! I see my last verse got messed up I need to get it straightened out.
A   Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 10:03 PM
thank you for the reply
A   Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 6:46 PM
Charlene, WOW, I felt, this was me. But, you are right this could be you. However, the visions still remain...Love this..Linda
Mccutcheon Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 9:49 PM
Thank you Linda, or your comments. You may want to read my edited poem. it could be anyone of us for sure.
Vaso Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 12:03 AM
Very insightful, beautiful, loved this poem! Not to mention makes one ponder for sure
Inyoureyes Avatar
August 12, 2014 at 6:12 AM
Wow, this is so touching, beautiful and powerful...and extremely sad. Come check out my poems.
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