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Shaken Baby

Oh the sham and serious shake, Earthen crust erases land. Upset moon mourns its men. Uplift of craven shore and ben. O the Winter its downer tanned. Of creature great and downy lost, The surgeon’s fissure quite abrupt. The baby’s tears from the bright sun - Befallen stars say it is done. The crude ovalis corrupt. 2/5/2020

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Date: 2/7/2020 8:05:00 AM
My friend, you have composed a deep, very imaginative and very image filled piece! A truly great read this morn n thanks for that wonderful gifting! A fav.. God bless....
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/7/2020 8:11:00 AM
Thank you so much, Robert!
Date: 2/6/2020 4:03:00 PM
Wow Kim I loved this!;) congrats on your win!;)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/6/2020 7:53:00 PM
Thank you, Brenda!
Date: 2/6/2020 6:42:00 AM
Beautifully crafted poem!!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/6/2020 6:49:00 AM
Thank you, Swetha!
Date: 2/5/2020 3:43:00 PM
Very imaginative Kim. Kind of dark but so creatively done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/5/2020 3:45:00 PM
Thank you! I hope you enjoyed the ride of words in my attempt at a mad-song.
Date: 2/5/2020 3:17:00 PM
Wow... that was g r e a t ! Love the imagery. Ann
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/5/2020 3:22:00 PM
Thanks so much, Ann! <3 This is a different kind of write for me.

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