Kim Rodrigues Poet Rhyme

Shaken Baby

Oh the sham and serious shake,
  Earthen crust erases land.
Upset moon mourns its men.
Uplift of craven shore and ben.
  O the Winter its downer tanned.

Of creature great and downy lost,
  The surgeon’s fissure quite abrupt.
The baby’s tears from the bright sun -
Befallen stars say it is done.
   The crude ovalis corrupt.
   
2/5/2020

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Robert Lindley February 7, 2020 at 8:05 AM My friend, you have composed a deep, very imaginative and very image filled piece! A truly great read this morn n thanks for that wonderful gifting! A fav.. God bless.... Kim Rodrigues February 7, 2020 at 8:11 AM Thank you so much, Robert!

Brenda Chiri February 6, 2020 at 4:03 PM Wow Kim I loved this!;) congrats on your win!;) Kim Rodrigues February 6, 2020 at 7:53 PM Thank you, Brenda!

Swetha Vangaveti February 6, 2020 at 6:42 AM Beautifully crafted poem!!! Kim Rodrigues February 6, 2020 at 6:49 AM Thank you, Swetha!

Chris Green February 5, 2020 at 3:43 PM Very imaginative Kim. Kind of dark but so creatively done. Kim Rodrigues February 5, 2020 at 3:45 PM Thank you! I hope you enjoyed the ride of words in my attempt at a mad-song.

Ann Foster February 5, 2020 at 3:17 PM Wow... that was g r e a t ! Love the imagery. Ann Kim Rodrigues February 5, 2020 at 3:22 PM Thanks so much, Ann! <3 This is a different kind of write for me.