Shaken

your heart is shaken
it's perspective now jaded
no strength to move on
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Moreno Avatar
September 16, 2009 at 12:59 PM
This is more of a Senryu, nice 5/7/5
Kendrick Avatar
September 16, 2009 at 6:40 AM
Nicely done with lots of emotion. Sara
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace