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Shake Up

Illness
casting shadows
over a persons view
making or breaking them slowly
shake up.


25/06/17

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Andrea Dietrich

June 26, 2017 at 9:56 PM

So glad you are doing better now.

Phyllis Babcock

June 27, 2017 at 12:16 PM

Thanks my friend. Praying you will feel better too. love phyl

Andrea Dietrich

June 26, 2017 at 9:55 PM

yes, Phyllis. you sure do get shaken up. About what you said at my poem the other day, we HAVE been through a lot and "it ain't over yet" Now I have tendonitis in my hand and even cortisone shot does not take it away. I wonder what fate has in store for me NEXT!!

Phyllis Babcock

June 27, 2017 at 12:15 PM

I guess we both have had that shake up this past year. Seems fate is taking us along the same line. Sending blessings your way my friend. love phyl

Arthur Vaso

June 25, 2017 at 10:03 PM

This makes me a wee bit sad, as I hope all that you are going though, makes you come out the other side stronger. I hope you know you are many peoples thoughts here! :)

Phyllis Babcock

June 26, 2017 at 12:21 PM

Do not be sad for they caught it before it got out of hand. I am on the good side of it my friend. I do realize how many people are there for me and I am so so thankful for my poetry family. It is heart lifting to be so loved. Thank you all. love phyl

Daniel Turner

June 25, 2017 at 4:08 PM

Mrs Phyllis, as we used to say as kids, "Just rub some dirt on it, Let's play ball" Get well soon:)

Phyllis Babcock

June 26, 2017 at 12:22 PM

Had me chuckling and yes lets play ball is a good motto to get moving. Thanks for the smile. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 25, 2017 at 1:21 PM

- Thinking of you and hoping for your speedy recovery, dear Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

June 26, 2017 at 12:23 PM

Thanks Anne Lise for your wishes and for your note. Truly feel cared and loved by my soup family. love phyl

Jan Allison

June 25, 2017 at 12:38 PM

I've just read your blog Phyllis and I'm so sorry that you've been ill :-( That 4th line is so poignant - I know from my husband's illness we need to fight it and it can be beaten:-) Get well soon:-) hugs Jan xx

Phyllis Babcock

June 26, 2017 at 12:25 PM

Sending healing prayers for your husband and yes positive thoughts go a long way. Thanks Jan for your wishes. love phyl

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