Shake Up

Illness
casting shadows
over a persons view
making or breaking them slowly
shake up.


25/06/17

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 6/26/2017 9:56:00 PM
So glad you are doing better now.
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 6/27/2017 12:16:00 PM
Thanks my friend. Praying you will feel better too. love phyl
Date: 6/26/2017 9:55:00 PM
yes, Phyllis. you sure do get shaken up. About what you said at my poem the other day, we HAVE been through a lot and "it ain't over yet" Now I have tendonitis in my hand and even cortisone shot does not take it away. I wonder what fate has in store for me NEXT!!
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 6/27/2017 12:15:00 PM
I guess we both have had that shake up this past year. Seems fate is taking us along the same line. Sending blessings your way my friend. love phyl
Date: 6/25/2017 10:03:00 PM
This makes me a wee bit sad, as I hope all that you are going though, makes you come out the other side stronger. I hope you know you are many peoples thoughts here! :)
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 6/26/2017 12:21:00 PM
Do not be sad for they caught it before it got out of hand. I am on the good side of it my friend. I do realize how many people are there for me and I am so so thankful for my poetry family. It is heart lifting to be so loved. Thank you all. love phyl
Date: 6/25/2017 4:08:00 PM
Mrs Phyllis, as we used to say as kids, "Just rub some dirt on it, Let's play ball" Get well soon:)
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 6/26/2017 12:22:00 PM
Had me chuckling and yes lets play ball is a good motto to get moving. Thanks for the smile. love phyl
Date: 6/25/2017 1:21:00 PM
- Thinking of you and hoping for your speedy recovery, dear Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 6/26/2017 12:23:00 PM
Thanks Anne Lise for your wishes and for your note. Truly feel cared and loved by my soup family. love phyl
Date: 6/25/2017 12:38:00 PM
I've just read your blog Phyllis and I'm so sorry that you've been ill :-( That 4th line is so poignant - I know from my husband's illness we need to fight it and it can be beaten:-) Get well soon:-) hugs Jan xx
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 6/26/2017 12:25:00 PM
Sending healing prayers for your husband and yes positive thoughts go a long way. Thanks Jan for your wishes. love phyl
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