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From somewhere in the pitch of night, comes a remnant from my childhood. The door lets in a crack of light, and there, outlined, where mother stood is a silhouette, against the wood. And, as if a star had gone astray she would touch my hair and kiss my brow, and brush my worries far away, while letting me allow, my eyes to close for sleep, somehow And as the years have come and gone I've often wished for just one night, from where she is, her light was thrown... And that somehow in the dead of night, the door allowed the shaft of light
______________________________________________________ 8/27/15

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Date: 11/5/2015 1:33:00 PM
Hey Carrie, a warm and hearty congratulations on your winning poem in the Screwed V11 contest! A sweet tribute to your mom. Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 11/5/2015 12:00:00 PM
nice win
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Date: 11/4/2015 9:33:00 PM
Congrats on top podium Carrie with this superb emotive write!
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Date: 11/4/2015 7:56:00 PM
Such an emotional, loving poem of tribute and longing for your dear mother, Carrie. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/4/2015 3:57:00 AM
Greetings Carrie! Congrats for your awesome WIN and 2nd placement! ;-)
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Date: 8/27/2015 11:53:00 PM
Beautiful!!! I hope you will stop pass and check out some of my work. I think you would enjoy "Remembrance A Mother's Story". I hope to see you there. Have a good night!!!
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Date: 8/27/2015 11:23:00 PM
Wow, Carrie , your work always amazes me. Hugs Eve
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