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Shaft of Light

From somewhere in the pitch of night, comes a remnant from my childhood. The door lets in a crack of light, and there, outlined, where mother stood is a silhouette, against the wood. And, as if a star had gone astray she would touch my hair and kiss my brow, and brush my worries far away, while letting me allow, my eyes to close for sleep, somehow And as the years have come and gone I've often wished for just one night, from where she is, her light was thrown... And that somehow in the dead of night, the door allowed the shaft of light
______________________________________________________ 8/27/15
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Romaine Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 1:33 PM
Hey Carrie, a warm and hearty congratulations on your winning poem in the Screwed V11 contest! A sweet tribute to your mom. Be Blessed, Neva
A  Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 12:00 PM
nice win
A. Sharma Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 9:33 PM
Congrats on top podium Carrie with this superb emotive write!
Haight Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 7:56 PM
Such an emotional, loving poem of tribute and longing for your dear mother, Carrie. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
Kimathi Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 3:57 AM
Greetings Carrie! Congrats for your awesome WIN and 2nd placement! ;-)
Walter Skyy Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 11:53 PM
Beautiful!!! I hope you will stop pass and check out some of my work. I think you would enjoy "Remembrance A Mother's Story". I hope to see you there. Have a good night!!!
Roper Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 11:23 PM
Wow, Carrie , your work always amazes me. Hugs Eve
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