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Shadows Dance

As shadows play and dance away upon the walls within her mind, her thoughts portray of yesterday and long lost dreams she left behind. A candle's light glows in the night, and casts its shadows from the past of love’s delight, though ‘twas finite, these hopes and dreams that didn’t last. A once bright flame she couldn’t tame, his passions burning uncontrolled; she’s not to blame, it’s such a shame that dying embers left her cold. These mem’ries gaunt as shadows taunt the tearful thoughts of love’s decay with endless daunt despite her want, and still these shadows dance away. April 30, 2020

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Date: 5/11/2020 9:58:00 AM
Congratulation John, a beautiful write and a deserved win - your last verse is awesome. Hugs, Jennifer.
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/11/2020 4:34:00 PM
Thank you for the congrats, Jenn, I appreciate it so much. Hugs, John
Date: 5/1/2020 3:54:00 PM
This is really wonderful John! I loved your entry and how you portray the shadows. Congratulations! xxoo
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/1/2020 4:29:00 PM
Thank you so much, Connie, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate you. Hugs, John
Date: 5/1/2020 2:37:00 PM
Very flowing poetry, John. so rhythmical and the words so meaningful!
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/1/2020 4:27:00 PM
Thank you so much for your thoughts and comments, Andrea, I appreciate you. Stay safe.
Date: 5/1/2020 10:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, I didn't know it was for a contest.
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/1/2020 10:36:00 AM
Thank you again , Eve!
Date: 5/1/2020 10:10:00 AM
Shadow have their play. It is hard to shut your mind of thoughts that like to tease us. Nicely done, John, enjoyed reading.
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/1/2020 10:36:00 AM
Thank you, Eve, I'm glad you enjoyed it. John
Date: 4/30/2020 9:47:00 PM
"and still these shadows dance away" This last thought tugs deeply at my heart. I don't know why. Could be the memories that linger within the poem. This is hauntingly beautiful, tender in so many ways. I wish to place this in my favorites. Well done my dear sweet friend. Hugs, Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/1/2020 5:02:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and comments, Brandy, and for tagging it as a favorite. The memories of lost love never go away no matter how hard we try. Stay safe my sweet friend. Hugs, John
Date: 4/30/2020 4:44:00 PM
Gorgeous write, John, with a capital 'G!'
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/30/2020 4:58:00 PM
Thanks, Gershon, with a capital “T”. Stay safe.
Date: 4/30/2020 1:17:00 PM
John, once again I am awed by not only the intelligent theme of your poetry, but the construction of it is wonderful. Excellent work my poetic friend.
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/30/2020 2:40:00 PM
Thanks so much for the wonderful comments, Kenneth. I struggled a bit putting this one together but comments like this make the effort worth it. I appreciate your thoughts my friend. Stay safe. John

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