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11/06/16

Second Place 

Mysterious Night Contest 

 

Shadows At Night


     Twilight almost faded in western sky
     Sun was down snatching my shabby shadow
     Starry sky brought Moon dim sad crescendo.
     Full moon expected  next to tomorrow.
      Moon light put my depressed shadow to lie.

                       I sat on solitary bank of stream
                    Little brittle ripples danced, not to cease.
                 Speed of whimsy wind started to increase
               My cluster of hairs rustling in strong breeze
                        I glanced second shadow as if in dream.

           Second shadow made me too curious
         Hazy smog prevailed and mystic mist dripped
         Startled thrilled with touch on my lips, that slipped.
         Through torn cumulous clouds maroon Moon peeped.
            Both shadows running simultaneous.
            
           Being scared alert, I stood up but found none
            My sweet heart, my love was supposed to come
              He must had hidden himself behind Palm
              Quickly I moved fast to find my handsome
              Pair of ghostly shadows started to run.
   
               He himself didn’t come but had sent shadow
           Moon was behind, two shadows were moving ahead
             I was relieved and felt safe being guarded
            Both shadows made for each other in parade.
              I got two shadows as fellows to follow.
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Smith Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 10:32 AM
Well done Anisha, congratulations...
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 22, 2017 at 11:02 PM
Congrats on your win with a nicely flowing poem.
Merryman Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 9:31 PM
An interesting tale, Anisha! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
A. Sharma Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 4:29 AM
Congrats on ur fine win with this awesome write Anisha!
Allison Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 1:21 PM
Such wonderful imagery - congrats on your win Anisha:-) hugs jan xx
Dutta Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 9:59 PM
Thanks Jan. Love. Anisha D
Negron Flores Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 1:01 PM
Congratulations Anisha.
Dutta Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 9:57 PM
Thanks Nayda
A  Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 11:19 AM
Anisha, Congratulations on your Screwed VIII WIN... Luv **SKAT**
Dutta Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 9:57 PM
Thanks SKAT. Love.Anisha D
Fleming Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 2:26 PM
Interesting poetical format, Anisha. I rather enjoyed the read! My best regards! :) john
Dutta Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 3:54 PM
Thank you John for appreciation Anisha D
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