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Shadows

You brought me sunlight

But then the darkness called you

Shadows fill my sky





Senryu on Sadness - Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by Laura Loo  31/8/2017

Copyright © Gary Smith | Year Posted 2017

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September 4, 2017 at 3:43 PM

Losing a beloved one is hard to accept; sadness is a constant companion. Congrats on your fine win, Gary. Regards // paul

September 4, 2017 at 4:33 PM

Thank you Paul :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 3, 2017 at 11:58 AM

- Congratulations on your great second place in the contest, Gary - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

September 3, 2017 at 1:03 PM

Thank you Anne-lise :)

September 3, 2017 at 11:56 AM

Congratulations Gary :)

September 3, 2017 at 1:03 PM

Thank you Heidi :)

September 2, 2017 at 3:09 PM

Hi Gary, awesome write! Good luck.

September 2, 2017 at 4:35 PM

Thank you Susan :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

August 31, 2017 at 9:15 PM

Excellent piece!

September 1, 2017 at 3:16 AM

Thank you Maureen :)

August 31, 2017 at 6:28 PM

Hi Gary. You expressed yourself well with this :)

August 31, 2017 at 6:29 PM

Thank you Heidi :)

August 31, 2017 at 4:14 PM

Love this Gary, so few words paint a vivid picture:-( hugs jan xx

August 31, 2017 at 4:15 PM

Thank you Jan :)

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