Shadows

You brought me sunlight But then the darkness called you Shadows fill my sky Senryu on Sadness - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Laura Loo 31/8/2017

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Date: 9/4/2017 3:43:00 PM

Losing a beloved one is hard to accept; sadness is a constant companion. Congrats on your fine win, Gary. Regards // paul

Gary Smith
Date: 9/4/2017 4:33:00 PM

Thank you Paul :)

Date: 9/3/2017 11:58:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great second place in the contest, Gary - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Smith
Date: 9/3/2017 1:03:00 PM

Thank you Anne-lise :)

Date: 9/3/2017 11:56:00 AM

Congratulations Gary :)

Gary Smith
Date: 9/3/2017 1:03:00 PM

Thank you Heidi :)

Date: 9/2/2017 3:09:00 PM

Hi Gary, awesome write! Good luck.

Gary Smith
Date: 9/2/2017 4:35:00 PM

Thank you Susan :)

Date: 8/31/2017 9:15:00 PM

Excellent piece!

Gary Smith
Date: 9/1/2017 3:16:00 AM

Thank you Maureen :)

Date: 8/31/2017 6:28:00 PM

Hi Gary. You expressed yourself well with this :)

Gary Smith
Date: 8/31/2017 6:29:00 PM

Thank you Heidi :)

Date: 8/31/2017 4:14:00 PM

Love this Gary, so few words paint a vivid picture:-( hugs jan xx

Gary Smith
Date: 8/31/2017 4:15:00 PM

Thank you Jan :)