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Written on 21/09/2023
Rhyme 8 and 9 syllables each line,

was Inspired by a contest but did not write for it

 

 

No! They do not know me at all, all of those shadows on the wall, they gather and walk around me, wonder who or what I could be. speak in a language of their own, a dialect to us unknown, hand gestures and whispers abound, much said, heard, yet without a sound. a senior shadow with a stoop, appears to attract bigger group, perhaps the wisest of the lot, this old peers thoughts, advice, much sought! in that old dark archaic room, there is a low light but less gloom, me the centre, object of query, their debate long without hurry. night on night, debate continued, several angles I was viewed, their conclusions shall never know, they walked away at morning glow. mystery still I shall remain, back though now in human domain, no interest shown as shadows did, truth about me still under a lid! life a journey in quest of self, the least understood was myself, time will come for a truth window, when I shall pass and be a shadow.

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Date: 9/21/2023 4:09:00 PM
Hello Krish, I like this poem about shadows. i am making it my fav. Enjoy your evening my friend. \Darlene\
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/24/2023 12:05:00 PM
Hello Krish, I am happy to make your day brighter. Yes i enjoyed it. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/21/2023 7:05:00 PM
Dalene! Thank you very much! Honoured!Happy you like it!

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