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Shadowplay

For the Senryu On Your Own Existence Contest Written June 23, 2015 Shadows stick to me Creep along my existence I'm never alone

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Date: 7/4/2015 8:59:00 AM

Fantastic! Congrats.

Date: 7/3/2015 10:45:00 PM

Congrats on ur win Brandon!

Date: 7/3/2015 6:53:00 PM

BRANDON, Congratulations on the win. SKAT

Date: 7/3/2015 6:29:00 PM

Brandon, Congratulations on Your Own Existence Senryu win. Love LINDA

Date: 7/3/2015 5:06:00 PM

wow, I am loving some of these in the HM category. A LOT. Congrats. I enjoyed this one.

Date: 7/3/2015 3:20:00 PM

Congratulations on your win a 7 on this beautiful verse. Hugs Eve

Date: 7/3/2015 12:15:00 PM

very nice, very subtle, very sneery

Date: 6/23/2015 3:48:00 PM

this is GREAT senryu writing, certainly better than the silly one I just did.

Brandon Carter
Date: 6/23/2015 5:14:00 PM

Thanks! I hadn't heard of Senryu before I saw this contest just now so I'm really glad you liked it!