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Shadowplay

For the Senryu On Your Own Existence Contest

Written June 23, 2015


Shadows stick to me
Creep along my existence
I'm never alone

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Richard Lamoureux

July 4, 2015 at 8:59 AM

Fantastic! Congrats.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

July 3, 2015 at 10:45 PM

Congrats on ur win Brandon!

Skat A

July 3, 2015 at 6:53 PM

BRANDON, Congratulations on the win. SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

July 3, 2015 at 6:29 PM

Brandon, Congratulations on Your Own Existence Senryu win. Love LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

July 3, 2015 at 5:06 PM

wow, I am loving some of these in the HM category. A LOT. Congrats. I enjoyed this one.

Eve Roper

July 3, 2015 at 3:20 PM

Congratulations on your win a 7 on this beautiful verse. Hugs Eve

John Lawless

July 3, 2015 at 12:15 PM

very nice, very subtle, very sneery

Andrea Dietrich

June 23, 2015 at 3:48 PM

this is GREAT senryu writing, certainly better than the silly one I just did.

Brandon Carter

June 23, 2015 at 5:14 PM

Thanks! I hadn't heard of Senryu before I saw this contest just now so I'm really glad you liked it!

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