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Shadowed Lines

A twisting line of pavement stretches far across into the horizon I look towards it, the dappling shadows of leaves sprinkling the gray sidewalk As the trees bend and sway with the new wind, the flowing balance of the shadows changes From a light, elegant form, to hurried, painfully fast, as the swirling wind pulls the branches whipping them from side to side, the pale green leaves begin to fall on that thin stretching line reaching too far away to see ~~~~~~~ 10th place in the contest: Shadows and Lines

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Date: 6/27/2011 5:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ^Rick's "Shadows and Lines" contest Marie. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/26/2011 3:21:00 PM
Congratulations Maria on the (outta sight win) in Ricks contest..
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Date: 6/26/2011 3:19:00 PM
Congratulations on the (outta sight win) Maria,& all the best.
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Date: 6/23/2011 8:57:00 AM
Compelling poem, Marie. Congratulations on your fine win in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/23/2011 8:03:00 AM
Wonderful write here Marie.Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/23/2011 5:28:00 AM
sunny congrats on your sparkiling win, marie! :) hugs, nette
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Date: 6/22/2011 10:32:00 PM
REally nice imagery here, Marie. I greatly enjoyed reading this one.Congrats for your win.
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Date: 6/22/2011 2:40:00 PM
Congrats Marie on your fantastic win in shadows and lines contest with this wonderful write ..enjoy sweet success with luv..
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Date: 6/17/2011 12:33:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Marie. Have yourself a wonderful inspiration filled weekend I will be back to read more Monday. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/16/2011 6:41:00 PM
I like every thing about this poem. Good wording and rhytm. I dig it a lot. I hope you place well in the comtest.
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