Shadow Tells

The picture on the wall
kites on the electric wire
Broken light
Through the known gaps of trees
The new letter in the old envelope
Shadow on the path of eve
Tells to sing for dark.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Bantawa Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 9:59 AM
a nice poem, congrats.
Deschler Avatar
November 11, 2013 at 6:18 PM
Congratulations on your win, Litan! Nicely done!
Seal Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 8:13 PM
Congratulations Litan on your No 1 win with this write. Take care, Richard
J.T. Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 9:16 AM
Congrats on your super win!
Dey Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 6:39 AM
Thank you all for your love...Litan
A   Avatar
November 9, 2013 at 10:42 PM
Litan, awesome win... nice to see you on the list.. LINDA
Nusairat Avatar
November 9, 2013 at 5:28 PM
Congratulation Litan
Adams Avatar
November 9, 2013 at 9:31 AM
congrats on your win in the contest my friend :) hugs
Mehta Avatar
November 9, 2013 at 4:13 AM
Congrats on the win , Litan
A  Avatar
November 8, 2013 at 8:49 PM
Litan, CONGRATS ;) on your win....thanks for the support.... love ~SKAT~
Jones Avatar
October 7, 2013 at 10:39 PM
Intriguing!!!
Deschler Avatar
October 5, 2013 at 1:13 PM
A very interesting poem, Litan, very well written!
Mehta Avatar
October 5, 2013 at 10:06 AM
Very thoughtful expressions on dark, Litan
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