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Shadow of Thinking

A glorious Sunshine came on my dream Cloud Blue sky as my mood Rainbow eovee was i staring the Sun ?

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Skat A

Date: 1/18/2014 9:01:00 AM

Bharti, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/16/2014 1:03:00 PM

Hi Bharti, this can be a Questionku ((the cousin to the haiku)) if you work on it a bit more... 3 lines 4 -5 -6 Ending with a question.. You're on the right track. **we need more questionku on this site :):)..... However, I like your free verse poem... A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/16/2014 12:29:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Bharti- I choose your first fine haiku poem and hope you will write many more in the future - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)