Shadow of the Day My Version

im discusted from what their doing
joining forces just to kill some more
they dont even seem to care
as bodies fall to the floor

             so
the darkness consimed them
and the bullets start to sprey
as people fly away
the darkness consumed them

the people run but cannot leave
they corner them at the shore
they dont even seem to care
as bodies drop to the floo

           go
run away from hell
and the bullets fly away
as people lay away
runaway from hell

         run
in fear from them
and the bullets start to sprey
as people fly away
in fear from them
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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