Written 23 January 2026
Placed Second in Seven by Seven Poetry Contest of Nette Onclaud
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A shadow veils the daylight Where sorrow sees swollen eyes, Dripping tears obscure the view As silent promise she keeps, After demise of her spouse, To share a sunken spirit- But at night, joy incarnate.
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