Shadow of Senryu Suite 5

What a nice quotation of sameness, liked much coz it has reality in practical life. Carry on my friend. Loved always, bl

What a "Shadow" my firiend...and how beautiful..but then truuth and honor are always weapons of love, aren't they..?!! The power in your words, echo back to me my own feelings. When I wrote Democracy, Republican Style, I could have been replying to your Shadow of Senryu Suite 5. Thank you again for yor insight.

just having a second peak Harry and it's even better second time around, well done my friend, sorry to hear your eyes are giving you jip again hope things improve quickly for you, I too will not be around for a few weeks now, if I get five minutes to myself I may dip a toe in see how the water is, take care...David

SO SORRY HARRY LUV TO HEAR OF EYE ISSUES PLAGUING U .. I ALSO AM DEALING WITH BLURRINESS SINCE MY CONCUSSION IN AUGUST .. THANKXX FOR YOUR SWEET ENCOURAGEMENT .. I WOULD LUV TO WRITE POEMS FOR LOVERS AND WEDDINGS .. I HAVE DONE SEVERAL FOR FUNERALS AT CHURCH .. WELL SOMEDAY I'LL BE AT THE RIGHT PLACE AT THE RIGHT TIME LUV .. STAY WELL

So clever!

MISS U HARRY LUV .. HOPE ALL IS OK ..

Thoughtful words penned here Harry.Very good Senryu.Best wishes to you.

Wowsers! Epic piece! Very inspirational! Thanks for this. Always, Laura

Very great.I will make this poem my daily dose

this is the essence of familial respect, harry...captured as only you can do... just beautiful!.. :) huggs

Great message you have pour out here my friend. Excellent. Michael

Absolutely fantastic Senryu - A winner in the contest. Thanks Harry for your enlightened comments on my poem the Journey of Love. The fact is that you have revealed the soul of the poem. In writing Quatrains I am inspired by the Urdu Language poet Josh Malihabadi whose 700 Rubai'yat contained in two books I have translated into English Quatrain. One of my books was published in USA and the second one's manuscript is being edited and will go to the press shortly. Regards

Harry; This is good. I like your last stanza. Respect is earrned, it's not a gift. Good luck in the contest. Lucy

Excellent write. Enjoyed. Tfs

Catie gave us a hard job! Light & Love

Nice re-write !!

I JUST REWROTE SHADES OF GREEN FROM CATIE .. IT WAS FUN .. SENDING U SOME EYE CANDY SUNSHINE HARRY LUV ..

Very stimulating theme here! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Catie has a very nice way of reflecting on her thoughts and you have emulated that. I sure wish I had the time to rework one of her poems. This is one contest difficult for me to get to. Good luck in her contest, Harry, and soupmail.

WONDERFUL PERCEPTION OF CATIE'S POEM HARRY LUV .. GOOD LUCK IN CONTEST .. HAPPY WEEKEND..AM ON PAIN MEDS FOR MY HANDS STILL .. PAINFUL AS EVER BUT POETRY AND NEW BABE KEEPS MY MIND OFF ME .. THANKXX FOR ASKING LUV ..

Last stanza summed up my way of thinking, scary for you that we think a little bit alike. Enjoyed

Enjoyed reading your work this eve..I am glad that I chose this one to read today...Sara

well done my friend!!

Harry well done I like it, best of luck.....David

A very well written poem Harry - and so true. - Good luck in the contest. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)