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Shadow of a Smile

shadow of a smile
a selfie in plum shadows
mysterious girl

dusky deep fragrance
living on the edge of June
thrills under the moon

nebulous image
a perfect moment captured
powerful sunset

in colorful sight
she is there and she is not
disappearing day
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Alhemaidy Avatar
September 22, 2023 at 5:15 PM
Hello Evelyn Judy Buehler, very nice cluster of Haiku's, have a great day, best regards ~AA
Buehler Avatar
September 22, 2023 at 8:51 PM
Hello Abdullah, Thank you for your very nice comments. :)
Wolf Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 9:00 PM
Scintillating haiku, Evelyn. The last two words just blew me away. Thanks, gw
Buehler Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 11:33 AM
Your remarks are so much appreciated, Gershon. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 1:28 PM
Very pretty imagery, Evelyn!
Buehler Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 3:40 PM
So pleased to read your lovely comment, Kim. Thank you.
Pandit Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 5:59 AM
A perfect moment captured, indeed! Enjoyed your take on the decaying day in dusky deep fragrance, Evelyn.
Buehler Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 11:25 AM
Thank you very much for your expressions of appreciation, Vijay. I hope your day is nice.
Andresen Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 12:44 AM
- Lovely written, Evelyn ...number two is my favorite :) - hugs
Buehler Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 11:21 AM
I am so gratified by your comments. Thank you, Anne-Lise. :) hugs
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