Shadow of a Smile

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shadow of a smile a selfie in plum shadows mysterious girl dusky deep fragrance living on the edge of June thrills under the moon nebulous image a perfect moment captured powerful sunset in colorful sight she is there and she is not disappearing day

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Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 9/22/2023 5:15:00 PM

Hello Evelyn Judy Buehler, very nice cluster of Haiku's, have a great day, best regards ~AA

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/22/2023 8:51:00 PM

Hello Abdullah, Thank you for your very nice comments. :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/29/2023 9:00:00 PM

Scintillating haiku, Evelyn. The last two words just blew me away. Thanks, gw

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/30/2023 11:33:00 AM

Your remarks are so much appreciated, Gershon. :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/29/2023 1:28:00 PM

Very pretty imagery, Evelyn!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/29/2023 3:40:00 PM

So pleased to read your lovely comment, Kim. Thank you.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/29/2023 5:59:00 AM

A perfect moment captured, indeed! Enjoyed your take on the decaying day in dusky deep fragrance, Evelyn.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/29/2023 11:25:00 AM

Thank you very much for your expressions of appreciation, Vijay. I hope your day is nice.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/29/2023 12:44:00 AM

- Lovely written, Evelyn ...number two is my favorite :) - hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/29/2023 11:21:00 AM

I am so gratified by your comments. Thank you, Anne-Lise. :) hugs