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Shadow Kiss

I am just a shadow love You never really see me Oh, I know, you say you do, True, your constantly deceiving I am just a blowing wind I speak, you do not hear Your attention goes astray to more important things, my dear To touch me is to feel me and this is what you show - I am just your shadow love My heart you do not know I am just the silhouette whose shade you seek from sun In rain , an umbrella , left by shoes when you are done Through bent morning glass you gaze at your beauty And I am who you seek to flatter this greeting Oh how I long , for your pleasure to expire You seek , You hear , Then hunt with desire I am just the shadow love In every waiting morning My kiss can never reach you It's my soul you keep ignoring.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/14/2013 10:06:00 AM
Hi David, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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David Graham
Date: 9/16/2013 6:40:00 AM
Hello Skat, thanks. Yes, very cool people here indeed!! Thank you for taking the time to say hi. :) I'm very new to this environment. I'm actually a musician /songwriter so this is a challenge :)
Date: 9/13/2013 1:17:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, David ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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David Graham
Date: 9/13/2013 7:19:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise :) It is easy to see there are many welcoming poets here. Thank you for taking the time to say hello.
Date: 9/12/2013 3:23:00 PM
well, this verse is highly a soulful, heartfelt piece. I really enjoy the rhyme and flow to it, and I would say it has a bit of meter too! Ireally love writing like this. It's very therapeutic, and your depth is revealed somewhat here. Welcome to the Soup!! Cindy
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David Graham
Date: 9/12/2013 3:25:00 PM
Thanks! I'm actually a songwriter and musician by nature so this is actually quite the challenge! Thank you again :)
Date: 9/12/2013 2:25:00 PM
ps...Love and enjoyed the magic in your words... I hope soon she'll finds you, and connects with the beauty from your heart.
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Date: 9/12/2013 2:23:00 PM
David, :-),, thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/12/2013 3:08:00 PM
ha ha Had to be honest... :-)
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David Graham
Date: 9/12/2013 2:49:00 PM
hahahaha drama and love thats a hoot !! All good stuff of course! I feel compelled to reply in the tone of Shakespeare, but I'll just glance from a distance with a nice hello :) Nice to meet you Linda, I shall surely read your poems to meet the depth of you. I have no clue what this poem was I posted just a rant to see what would come :)

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