Shadow Boxing

Death accepts us all Life’s the discriminator Move towards the light By David Kavanagh

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Christopher Flaherty

Date: 6/21/2020 10:28:00 PM

Death has no Choice We do

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 6/22/2020 1:37:00 PM

Yeah i think what i meant or was trying to say David was death is not our choice it comes to us all regardless. Come to think of it as i am writting neither technically is our birth. Otherwise we could choose to live as long as we want and choose our patents Love it made me think Brilliant love your circle of life belief that way in fact we do live forever just in different forms

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/22/2020 10:51:00 AM

Hi Christopher I think I’m speaking metaphorically as in my believe that your dead before your born you live then your dead again, in a perpetual loop, as in life’s choices some people have very limited rights if any at all, hence the choices they do make are discriminatory, but most of the time I agree that we do have choice but it’s corrupted by ignorance and bias cheers David

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/20/2020 8:46:00 AM

I think I will go a few more rounds before moving towards the light. A thought provoking write. ;0)

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/20/2020 11:07:00 AM

Me too, I hope to stay in the game a bit longer but without life’s tunnel vision so I’ll keep towards the wider light, cheers David

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/19/2020 1:03:00 PM

Hmm...thought provoking

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/20/2020 11:18:00 AM

Hi Kim the light is enlightenment rather than life’s prejudice, death just accepts us all.