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Shadow

Did my shadow 
change your world
Or did it just make 
you want to stay away
Did it change your course 
in any way.


wrote 6/ 12/ 2017  9 pm  Monday Was watching a spy movie and a shadow went across the wall.  So there ya go :)

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Suzanne C. Goudreau Date: 10/21/2017 9:57:00 PM Intriguing message in this write. The last line very cleverly scripted. A joy to read. Login to Reply

Kelly Deschler Date: 10/5/2017 7:09:00 PM An interesting write and very suspenseful. I think this could be interpreted deeper in many ways... Very good writing, Debbie. Keep up the great work! Login to Reply

Maria Williams Date: 6/17/2017 10:03:00 PM One of those thoughts that involuntarily flit across ones mind at times and don't relate to the situation but if held onto are none the less quite significant. Well captured Debbie...Maria Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/17/2017 9:23:00 PM Dang, I have clicked on four new poems of yours and I read them all. I am hoping to find one that I somehow missed. let me look a little more. I just really appreciate your taking time to read so many of mine, Debbie. Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/16/2017 8:48:00 AM - Touching ... well written - Lovely weekend, Debbie :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Daniel Turner Date: 6/14/2017 4:47:00 PM I suppose we would all like to think we matter. Damned vanity. Really well written, Debbie. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/14/2017 3:48:00 PM I really like this, Debbie. a bit of depth to it in such a short form. sorry I need to rush offline now. but it was great seeing two of your recent poems! Login to Reply

Chris Green Date: 6/14/2017 7:07:00 AM Such a sad little piece Debbie. I can feel the loneliness in your words. Login to Reply