Debbie Duncan Poet Verse

Shadow

Did my shadow 
change your world
Or did it just make 
you want to stay away
Did it change your course 
in any way.


wrote 6/ 12/ 2017  9 pm  Monday Was watching a spy movie and a shadow went across the wall.  So there ya go :)

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Suzanne C. Goudreau October 21, 2017 at 9:57 PM Intriguing message in this write. The last line very cleverly scripted. A joy to read.

Kelly Deschler October 5, 2017 at 7:09 PM An interesting write and very suspenseful. I think this could be interpreted deeper in many ways... Very good writing, Debbie. Keep up the great work!

Maria Williams June 17, 2017 at 10:03 PM One of those thoughts that involuntarily flit across ones mind at times and don't relate to the situation but if held onto are none the less quite significant. Well captured Debbie...Maria

Andrea Dietrich June 17, 2017 at 9:23 PM Dang, I have clicked on four new poems of yours and I read them all. I am hoping to find one that I somehow missed. let me look a little more. I just really appreciate your taking time to read so many of mine, Debbie.

Anne-Lise Andresen June 16, 2017 at 8:48 AM - Touching ... well written - Lovely weekend, Debbie :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner June 14, 2017 at 4:47 PM I suppose we would all like to think we matter. Damned vanity. Really well written, Debbie.

Andrea Dietrich June 14, 2017 at 3:48 PM I really like this, Debbie. a bit of depth to it in such a short form. sorry I need to rush offline now. but it was great seeing two of your recent poems!

Chris Green June 14, 2017 at 7:07 AM Such a sad little piece Debbie. I can feel the loneliness in your words.