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I was fading in your care just a shadow in the air a soul without body a face without head half alive half dead. Jessica

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Date: 9/9/2024 6:50:00 AM
Dear Jess, So well said and so powerful in your message. A wonderful read! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Jessica Carrasco
Date: 9/9/2024 5:26:00 PM
Thank you Daniel, your message means a lot...
Date: 9/8/2024 8:26:00 PM
With so few words, you have created a durable image here, Jessica. Lovely!
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Jessica Carrasco
Date: 9/9/2024 3:46:00 AM
Thank you Gerson
Date: 9/8/2024 6:50:00 PM
That's one caregiver that needs kicked to the curb. Fosho
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/9/2024 4:44:00 AM
Lol. For sure
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Jessica Carrasco
Date: 9/9/2024 3:47:00 AM
Right? what "Fosho" means?

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