Shadow

I was fading
in your care
just a shadow
in the air
a soul without body
a face without head
half alive
half dead.

Jessica
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Rodgers Avatar
September 9, 2024 at 6:50 AM
Dear Jess, So well said and so powerful in your message. A wonderful read! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Carrasco Avatar
September 9, 2024 at 5:26 PM
Thank you Daniel, your message means a lot...
Wolf Avatar
September 8, 2024 at 8:26 PM
With so few words, you have created a durable image here, Jessica. Lovely!
Carrasco Avatar
September 9, 2024 at 3:46 AM
Thank you Gerson
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