Shadow

You light up the walls, While I move as a shadow. I'm just passing through.

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Howard Kerr

Date: 2/2/2024 11:43:00 AM

A senyru is a most formidable challenge for the writer. You have discharged your literary duties in a most convincing manner. Superb concept, imaginatively concise word selection. It probes depths Well done Howard

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 2/2/2024 11:51:00 AM

Thank you.

Eve Roper

Date: 11/26/2023 7:32:00 PM

Imagery of the shadow moving against the wall as the light reflects. Very good.

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 11/26/2023 9:38:00 PM

Thanks.

John Lawless

Date: 10/17/2023 6:10:00 AM

A very interesting write Hilda, nicely done. I am always intrigued by poems about shadows....."just passing through" great transparent imagery

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/17/2023 6:49:00 AM

Glad you liked it.

Ink Empress

Date: 10/12/2023 12:39:00 AM

“Im just passing through” what a heartfelt and beautiful haiku this is. A deep and intriguing one that left a poetic impression! Loved reading this

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/12/2023 6:23:00 AM

Thank you. I appreciate your comments.

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 10/12/2023 12:24:00 AM

A good poem. Well done.

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/12/2023 6:21:00 AM

Thank you. I enjoyed writing it.