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Hilda Greenhough

Shadow

You light up the walls,
While I move as a shadow.
I'm just passing through.

Copyright © Hilda Greenhough | Year Posted 2023

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February 2, 2024 at 11:43 AM

A senyru is a most formidable challenge for the writer. You have discharged your literary duties in a most convincing manner. Superb concept, imaginatively concise word selection. It probes depths Well done Howard

Hilda Greenhough

February 2, 2024 at 11:51 AM

Thank you.

November 26, 2023 at 7:32 PM

Imagery of the shadow moving against the wall as the light reflects. Very good.

Hilda Greenhough

November 26, 2023 at 9:38 PM

Thanks.

October 17, 2023 at 6:10 AM

A very interesting write Hilda, nicely done. I am always intrigued by poems about shadows....."just passing through" great transparent imagery

Hilda Greenhough

October 17, 2023 at 6:49 AM

Glad you liked it.

October 12, 2023 at 12:39 AM

“Im just passing through” what a heartfelt and beautiful haiku this is. A deep and intriguing one that left a poetic impression! Loved reading this

Hilda Greenhough

October 12, 2023 at 6:23 AM

Thank you. I appreciate your comments.

October 12, 2023 at 12:24 AM

A good poem. Well done.

Hilda Greenhough

October 12, 2023 at 6:21 AM

Thank you. I enjoyed writing it.

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