Shades of Green

sitting aside the shadows ripp'd jeans and red stillettos smoke(y)d, husky musk of haze dazed, deliberate a'mazed but tu tu'(á)more deep set eyes seduced flushed cheeked, acapella twice beats beats twice set on repeat she sways in his (whirl)wind breath(less) tongues twirl heated silence announced enunciated moons blushed in arousal twin flutes lain upon the floor an ocean whispers to the shore beats breaths beats night, death, dawn beauty brushes beneath and above and beyond and more
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Warlov Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 6:26 AM
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Chircop Avatar
September 10, 2020 at 9:07 AM
Swirling...Intense poetry of many shades.I forgot how to write them.Lovely post TS.
Horsman Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 11:19 PM
Love your shades of green, and where it goes..
Mcgee Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 1:50 PM
Romantically HOT! loved your format too...really was a breathless twirl.
Wolf Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 12:56 PM
When you say 'Romanticism,' you mean Romanticism!! Hot one. :) gw
Labyrinth Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 11:27 AM
https://youtu.be/r7JSsVRHuDI
Krutsinger Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 9:04 AM
I enjoyed the way this poem danced, especially here: "she sways in his (whirl)wind breath(less) tongues twirl"
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