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Shades of Green

sitting aside the shadows ripp'd jeans and red stillettos smoke(y)d, husky musk of haze dazed, deliberate a'mazed but tu tu'(á)more deep set eyes seduced flushed cheeked, acapella twice beats beats twice set on repeat she sways in his (whirl)wind breath(less) tongues twirl heated silence announced enunciated moons blushed in arousal twin flutes lain upon the floor an ocean whispers to the shore beats breaths beats night, death, dawn beauty brushes beneath and above and beyond and more

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Date: 9/16/2023 6:26:00 AM
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Date: 9/10/2020 9:07:00 AM
Swirling...Intense poetry of many shades.I forgot how to write them.Lovely post TS.
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Date: 7/28/2020 11:19:00 PM
Love your shades of green, and where it goes..
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Date: 7/26/2020 1:50:00 PM
Romantically HOT! loved your format too...really was a breathless twirl.
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Date: 7/26/2020 12:56:00 PM
When you say 'Romanticism,' you mean Romanticism!! Hot one. :) gw
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Date: 7/26/2020 11:27:00 AM
https://youtu.be/r7JSsVRHuDI
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Date: 7/26/2020 9:04:00 AM
I enjoyed the way this poem danced, especially here: "she sways in his (whirl)wind breath(less) tongues twirl"
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