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Shades of Crimson

innocent white lamb
                                deep darkness; shades of crimson
                                           golden lion roars

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Sara Kendrick

October 17, 2023 at 1:41 PM

Excellent senryu. I like it. He is the lamb Who takes away the sins of those who accept Him as their Savior. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page with congratulations. Sara

Sally Eslinger

June 10, 2023 at 6:33 PM

No! I cry out! Here you’ve penned the entire history in eleven words, three lies that pull me prostrate to the ground weeping. The power of words? The power of a poet’s voice? The stunning truth of language and image over staying silent? Yes! You’ve set down here the truth of poetry to power, catalyst for motion to the heart, mind & soul. Heaven blesses your pen for its touching truth xox

Bj Legros Kelley

August 10, 2023 at 8:50 PM

Sally, thank you so much for your comment, I am incredibly blessed that you felt so strongly the message behind these few words. Our Lord, the innocent precious lamb of God is truly the Lion who is powerful and just! May He bless you and keep you and make His face to shine upon you my sweet friend <3

Jennifer Proxenos

June 5, 2023 at 1:38 PM

Such powerful biblical words, thank-you for sharing BJ. HUGS AND BLESSINGS, Jennifer

Bj Legros Kelley

August 10, 2023 at 8:47 PM

Blessings to you as well dear Jennifer <3 Thank you for your visit and sweet comments, hugs and blessings to you as well :) <3

Michael Tor

May 26, 2023 at 2:17 PM

BJ this one's a favorite. He will return soon my friend. Love this Poetry BJ. So few words and so Powerfully magnificent. Amen...

Bj Legros Kelley

May 26, 2023 at 2:54 PM

Thank you Michael, what encouraging words :) Your fave is a sweet honor. God bless you :)

Victor Buhagiar

May 26, 2023 at 1:03 AM

Poor lamb. She can't escape.

Bj Legros Kelley

May 26, 2023 at 2:52 PM

My poem is a depiction, just an image that came to my mind after I read from the book of Revelation in chapter 5 verses 5-6. The lamb is the escape, and the lion is the lamb :)