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Shade No More

crouching for shelter from pattering rain, I sat - before cutting him.

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Shirley Hawkins

Date: 4/22/2020 8:36:00 PM

The first cut is the deepest.....

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/22/2020 11:35:00 PM

True.. It is a universal truth..Even for relationships..Takecare always..

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/21/2020 8:24:00 PM

Now I know what you do behind sheltering bushes! lol. G.L! :) gw

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/22/2020 12:22:00 AM

Lol.. It is not my axe.. Takecare Gershon

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/21/2020 2:26:00 PM

Poignant, Jenish. Ouch! Good luck in the contest.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/22/2020 12:20:00 AM

Thank you Sam.. It is not for the contest..

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/21/2020 2:19:00 PM

Ouch!!!! Wonderful Haiku dearest, Jenish!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/22/2020 12:19:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios.. I sent a mail to PS.. But still the same I saw in your poems.. Poet turned off comments..

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/21/2020 12:27:00 PM

A great thought provoking write - a great deal and a deep meaning in just a few words. Blessings, Jennifer.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/22/2020 12:17:00 AM

Thank you Jennifer for your delightful words..Takecare..

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/21/2020 8:54:00 AM

Oh my, poor tree. Used and abused. Thanks for your kind visit.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/21/2020 9:52:00 AM

Thank you Richard for your support..Takecare..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/21/2020 8:46:00 AM

Deeply meaningful, Jenish. We humans have little regard for nature.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/21/2020 9:51:00 AM

True..May be nature is retaliating now..Thank you so much..

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/21/2020 7:47:00 AM

Love it, perfect image Jenish. Tom

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/21/2020 9:49:00 AM

Thank you Tom.. Takecare..

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/21/2020 2:18:00 AM

Ah, poignant and well-penned in such brevity also!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/21/2020 9:49:00 AM

Thank you Caren for your kind words..Stay safe..