'shackled'

manacle she felt 
incarcerated by things 
beyond her control



©220720121755

lifesenryu

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

December 11, 2014 at 9:40 AM

I feel Wilma XXXX hugs...rajat

Elizabeth Wesley

September 13, 2012 at 2:20 PM

Hi Wilma, I think you wrote this for a lot of us. We seem to get wound up with so many things that it seems normal. Love the way you tell the story though. What happened to your sweet face?

Deborah Burch

July 25, 2012 at 1:11 PM

I know this feeling Wilma...well said!! well written RU!!! love ya, deb

Jack Horne

July 24, 2012 at 1:20 PM

wow, you said so much in so few lines here, Wilma - love it. Hope you're having a great week lfde : )

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 24, 2012 at 9:58 AM

imagine many feel this way Wilma luv.. always a beautiful thought emerges from your words .. how have u been luv? we are sweltering witj 100 plus temmps but great for beach days.. am feeling fine now ..how about u?

James Peranteau

July 24, 2012 at 2:18 AM

Great Senryu dear poet ! And I'm with Andrea here...May your days be joyous Wilma ! Much love, james

Andrea Dietrich

July 23, 2012 at 9:09 PM

Hey, this seems to go along with some themes of some other recent poems of yours. I sure hope you are not feeling shackled, dear girl!! I enjoyed seeing a senryu from you today.