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All I ever did was love and take good care of you, in return you took a knife and slice my heart in two
I became very ill after I put your happiness in front of mines, you were never worth fighting for after these horrible times.
The good life I have always tried to help and you did get caused many nights of extreme pain, I wonder to myself why did I care  for someone that was trying their best to drive me insane. 
One day will come when my heart will be very strong and not weak, then is when a taste of your own medicine for surely will bring an end to the tears falling down my cheek.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 6/9/2017 6:53:00 PM
Well done Mike, that Friday feeling captured in just 8 short lines, Regards, Kevin
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Date: 6/9/2017 6:45:00 PM
Lovely little poem, regards Kevin
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Corine Wilson
Date: 6/9/2017 7:02:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 6/9/2017 6:32:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your story, very poignant and a situation that will be recognised by many. I hope it wasn't your broken heart, Regards Kevin
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Corine Wilson
Date: 6/9/2017 7:03:00 PM
Its definitely a broken heart that was cause by love.
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