Severe Suffering

All I ever did was love and take good care of you, in return you took a knife and slice my heart in two
I became very ill after I put your happiness in front of mines, you were never worth fighting for after these horrible times.
The good life I have always tried to help and you did get caused many nights of extreme pain, I wonder to myself why did I care  for someone that was trying their best to drive me insane. 
One day will come when my heart will be very strong and not weak, then is when a taste of your own medicine for surely will bring an end to the tears falling down my cheek.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Shaw Avatar
June 9, 2017 at 6:53 PM
Well done Mike, that Friday feeling captured in just 8 short lines, Regards, Kevin
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June 9, 2017 at 6:45 PM
Lovely little poem, regards Kevin
Wilson Avatar
June 9, 2017 at 7:02 PM
Thanks
Shaw Avatar
June 9, 2017 at 6:32 PM
Thank you for sharing your story, very poignant and a situation that will be recognised by many. I hope it wasn't your broken heart, Regards Kevin
Wilson Avatar
June 9, 2017 at 7:03 PM
Its definitely a broken heart that was cause by love.
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