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out grocery-shopping with her mom. she shrieks with joy... mom picked up ice-cream Date written: 10/14/2019

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Date: 10/15/2019 11:47:00 PM
Edward, I like this Senryu 'Seventh Heaven'. A nice day at the store with treats realized. -Richard
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/16/2019 6:20:00 AM
Thank you, Richard:-) I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 10/14/2019 8:01:00 PM
Ah - those sweet innocent joys. Although I still shriek with joy at the thought of ice cream. Well done, Edward.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/14/2019 11:25:00 PM
Thank you, Line:-) Well, we all scream for ice-cream, don't we? LOL

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