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Seventh Heaven

out grocery-shopping

with her mom. she shrieks with joy...

        mom picked up ice-cream



Date written: 10/14/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Theraven Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 11:47 PM
Edward, I like this Senryu 'Seventh Heaven'. A nice day at the store with treats realized. -Richard
Ibeh Avatar
October 16, 2019 at 6:20 AM
Thank you, Richard:-) I'm glad you liked it!
Gauthier Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 8:01 PM
Ah - those sweet innocent joys. Although I still shriek with joy at the thought of ice cream. Well done, Edward.
Ibeh Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 11:25 PM
Thank you, Line:-) Well, we all scream for ice-cream, don't we? LOL
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