Seventeen Syllables



Has syllable limit
About nature
Inspires
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Dietrich Avatar
October 26, 2025 at 12:08 PM
Nice one. I like how this spells out haiku. But modern ones use less than 17 syllables. I prefer the new way!
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November 7, 2025 at 8:33 AM
Andrea, thanks for your comments and visit. Have you written any non-classical haiku? I've done some and they are more difficult to write. Best Wishes~ Warren
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